Part two to the story posted on April 1 - you can find Part 1 here.
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Drada’s thoughts raced. ‘You set off the alert. You planned
this. You planned me. Why me?’ Beneath the thick, dark wool of his coat, goosebumps
ran down his arms.
Gan’s eyes darted away, dark with the shadow of memories. ‘I
know what they do with the prisoners,' he repeated. His words sounded as though they
were dragged from him. ‘They’re taken to a sorcerer.’
Drada’s breath caught. His chest felt as if it were crushed until
he couldn’t breathe. ‘A… sorcerer?’
Gan hunched impressive shoulders, appearing small despite
his bulk. ‘Yeah.’ Blue eyes held Drada’s grey ones, but the sergeant looked
like he’d rather be elsewhere. ‘You still got that chain?’
The colonel’s hand dropped to his belt pouch. ‘It’s…’ His
throat seized on his son’s name. ‘It’s for Phaeton.’
‘I know.’
Drada’s mouth worked soundlessly. Gan’s face drooped in a
frown and he patted the colonel’s shoulder awkwardly. Drada clutched the pouch
and its precious cargo. He’d known this day would come, but it had always been
tomorrow. Tomorrow didn’t need thinking about. Everyone knew tomorrow never
came.
‘You’re sure?’ Drada hadn’t seen his son for nearly three
years, not since charges were brought for practising illegal, experimental sorcery on
humans.
‘I was virtually an uncle to that boy, Drada. I’m sure it’s
him.’
Drada trembled, battered by a hurricane of emotion. When the
storm passed, he found himself leaning against the wall and gasping for breath.
Gan offered a hand, but Drada brushed him aside. His hand switched between the
hilt of his sword and the pouch. Which? Neither option bore contemplation. One
would put an end to it now, one would pass responsibility to others. One would
offer irrevocable finality, the other the possibility of no closure at all.
Neither should be for a father to execute.
‘Where?’ His voice rasped, so hoarse it was barely audible
over the stamp of his boots on the prison’s bare stone floor.
Grabbing the candle, Gan hurried to catch up, his mail
jingling. ‘Phaeton?’
‘Who else?’
Gan waved his hands to signal his helplessness. ‘The prison
warden? The lord governor?’ His voice hushed. ‘Duke Alcon? Many are involved,
you could want…’ He trailed off under the baleful, grey, glare. ‘This way.’
They took a narrow stairwell, spiralling deep underground.
Drada counted the floors. They passed the prison’s upper levels and into the
lower, forgotten levels; levels the king had ordered bricked up, levels heavy
with the dark secrets of the past. He saw the broken brickwork where sealed
doorways had burst asunder. No man with a hammer had wrought that damage. The
edges of the bricks gleamed, melted and glassy in the weak candle flame;
evidence a sorcerer had been this way.
They trod through the darkness of the horrific past, and deeper
into ancient history; a time of whispered fear and half-formed legends.
Finally, the stairs spilled out deep in the bowels of the prison. This was a
place Drada had never stood, not even before the king’s edict. The walls here
were rough, unformed by human hands. He stared into a vast cavern, stalactites
and stalagmites spearing the empty space. In the distance, a red glow burned. Rumour
spoke of a lake of magma, fuelling the worst and darkest of the ancient
sorceries. Drada’s gut clenched.
Voices echoed out of the glowing darkness, distorted and
twisted by the confining stone. It was impossible to tell how many men or
where. Drada shrank backwards into the cold, rough wall.
Extinguishing the candle, Gan pushed him forward. ‘Prison
guards,’ he whispered. ‘Making a delivery.’ He nudged Drada into a shallow hollow
in the wall.
Drada pressed himself hard against the stone, but the
depression was too shallow to offer any real cover. His heart thudded inside
his ribcage as the voices drew nearer. Gan dug his fingers into Drada’s arm. He
froze. Sweat trickled down his nose as together they peered into the red
shadows.
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This is part of the A to Z Blogging Challenge Series. If you missed the previous posts, you can find them here - A, B, C and D.
This is part of the A to Z Blogging Challenge Series. If you missed the previous posts, you can find them here - A, B, C and D.
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Author's Note: Due to the time constraints of the A to Z Challenge, this piece of fiction has not undergone my usual rigorous editing process and is essentially a first draft.
6 comments:
Very fun read! I'm not a huge fantasy reader simply because I'm too linear and literal to follow a lot of the world building out there, but this was very engaging!
I must be getting something right if I'm sucking in some non-fantasy readers. Thanks Lorca!
essentially your first draft- GREAT!
It had a very hasty polish, but didn't have time to ferment and no one else reviewed it like I normally would. Glad you like it anyway :-)
Pretty amazing for a first draft. I am always impressed when people break out real work and actually produce something creative for these challenges. Makes it worth even more when the challenge is over, as opposed to the rest of the blogs (including mine) which are just rambling through the alphabet. Great job, Ciara
Thanks, Christina. I consider this part of my prescribed treatment for perfectionism LOL. I have to start finishing things and getting them out.
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